little ache

June 2, 2010 at 4:07 pm (poem)

good evening again I’m crawling
to my favorite place
tear on your tissue with my spikes
and watch you breathing slow
stabbing on with glee and then I lie low
just to return with fangs
you run from me, you run with her
build up muscle walls
but you haven’t beat me yet


  1. slpmartin said,

    I having some difficulty with the imagery in this one…could you give a bit of a hint on this one? or is puzzlement my fate…I can live with either one. 😉

  2. lisra said,

    I’ll just be lazy cos its late and night and quote what my comment deviantart was:
    “Stupid dramatization. In irregular periods I suffer from chest pain due to a crook in my thoracal spine, which presses against the tissue there. At least that’s what my oprthopaedic surgeon is telling me. It is not nice and hurt me minutes before so I thought I scrawl something in its “honor”.”
    So there’s no great deal of imagery, the pain gets personified, there’s a one personal reference (“you run with her”) and a nod to the treatment (running and training the chest muscles).
    Thank you for reading my stuff. 🙂

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